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Yes, Emily, HopeJan Mordenski
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Yes, Emily, Hope

Jan Mordenski


is something feathery

but even you knew

of its highly seductive danger.


Like you, we tend to revel

in the cloudless sight

of the untarnished dove 

that lifts our thoughts then

sets them down, so tenderly,

in fields of whitening flowers.


But you also knew that other call,

that of the drifting hawk 

who inscribes the autumn air

in mesmerizing circles—


the sort we all made on

grey hyphenated pages

before we actually

learned to write—


that we need consider his 

unmatched sight, his claws, 

his deft ability to snatch up life

pick it to the bone


before we ever hope

to set down our minds

on paper.  




"Yes, Emily, Hope" was written after I toured the Dickinson house at Amherst.  Her famous lines about hope had always cheered me, but her life and surroundings offered insight into the more serious aspects of writing poetry.  Only after that visit did I begin to realize the great responsibility we writers have to our readers regarding truth and honestly.



JAN MORDENSKI was born in Detroit, Michigan. She is the author of the chapbook The Chosen Pattern (Quadra-Project, 1988).  Her poem "Crochet" was published in Plainsong and in Ted Kooser's series, “American Life in Poetry.” 

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